Jahan,
Overall your blog on Pet Sounds met the
criteria required for MH2. While it was an easy blog to read there are several
things that you might want to consider before writing your next blog. Try
“beefing” up your paragraphs. There are several that only consist of three
sentences and are straight to the point. There’s no fault on being concise, but
providing more information per paragraph may help the reader relate to what
you’re trying to relay. There were also a few grammatical errors, “US.,” in the
third paragraph and sounds in Pet Sounds isn’t capitalized later in the same
paragraph. I’m sure they were just overlooked, but will easily stand out to a
reader. These are minor errors and in no way take away from the overall quality
of the blog and I look forward to reading more of you pieces.
Taken from: http://jahangonzalezmh2blog.blogspot.com/
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