Kelsey,
After reading your blog and the two of us discussing it class, we clearly are of the same sentiment towards The Velvet Underground. I wholeheartedly agree that if it weren’t for Andy Warhol Velvet never would have made it to mainstream. It’s difficult to protest that a band is terrible with Warhol’s pretext of it being a part of art in the Exploding Plastic Inevitable when trendy art critics and bohemian crowds applaud his work.
As for any technicalities in your work I’d say you should follow APA format or something similar. Breaking up your blog into multiple paragraphs when appropriate would benefit the reader by giving them a pause during changes in topics. Other than that one minor adjustment your blog excels form the others I’ve read.
-Patric Flynn
Taken from Kelsey Godfrey's Blog on The Velvet Underground.
http://kelseyagodfrey.blogspot.com/2012/09/the-velvet-underground-nico.html
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